Hello Entrepreneurs,
I'm a business plan writer, a recent MBA-school graduate and an entrepreneur myself, and I'd be happy to revise your business pitch text.
When I was at university, I led teams that won two separate plan & pitch competitions with cash prizes. Since then I've worked with over a dozen companies to create business plans, investor pitches and grants, most of which have been successful.
I'm currently working as a principal on two different technology startups, one as a CFO and the other as a CEO (!), but I do freelance work on the side to pay my bills.
In short, I know how to speak the language of investors. I've quickly reviewed your business plan and I believe I have an understanding of the concept (a cool gelateria/cocktail bar with a target demographic of people like ... me!).
For this project I will work in two stages. First we should talk briefly (phone, online chat or by email) about your goals for this pitch and what the audience is like. Then I will revise the document and send it back to you. You take a read of it and then have the option to return it to me to request further specific revisions. We'll go back and forth until you are happy, and then you can release the project payment.
How does that sound? Please let me know if I can be of service or answer any questions. Thanks.
Sincerely,
Sanjai Tripathi
Corvallis, OR USA