Rewriting a 700 word sales script

I have an approx 700 word sales script which is being used for a click-to-call marketing campaign, and I need to have it re written in a professional manner to really maximise the sales punch and to articulate the message! This is an urgent task, only bid if you if you can deliver within 24 hours. This will be a very simple job for the right person. Much more work available if this is a successful venture!