Hi there!
I’m Deborah. I think I have bid on another story for you – it has a different project number to this one, but my bid is much the same.
I’d be pleased to proofread this story for you perfectly – using Track Changes.
I am a native English speaker (educated to University level with English majors).
I assure you that I approach my work professionally, reliably provide excellent proofreading and am very friendly to deal with.
I am used to doing extensive proofreading involving grammatical &sentence structure errors, and freeing up the flow of the story.
My latest review says: “Deborah did a stellar job. She's an excellent, very professional, editor. I appreciate her attention to detail and her communication during the process.”
I look forward to bringing all my experience and expertise to working on your story, so it reads easily and fluently, and so that its characters, plot and ideas come through clearly and with impact.
Samples 5&6 in my Freelancer Portfolio are from fiction that I’ve worked on and display my editing/proofreading skill.
I suggest an edit followed by a proofread. If you'd like to see check the story in between, let me know. I will probably have questions for you to answer to help clarify things – and you might want to tweak the new-look story too.
Do you mind telling me the word count, and any time-frame requirements, please? I can then bid more accurately.
I always work carefully and thoroughly and aim to make my clients happy!
Regards
Deborah