Run, I had to run. Run anywhere, I must follow the sun. Will it lead me to the one special place, that place that lays so comforting like the lace on my panties? Snagged! I'm caught for the first time. I thought if I fought now than it would all be over, I'll surely die and it would be.... My own fault.
"My stomach hurts so bad!" Laney wined in her head as her eyes began to adjust to the light and her sight focused from her blurred slumber. Suddenly, Laney let out an interrupting high pitched squeal. "What the fuck is crawling on me!? Wait, why am I outside...?" she had so many questions, and as she feared, no one was around to answer. She was alone and cold. Never in her life has she felt so vulnerable.
"Ugh" she moaned, than looked down at her ankle which was swollen to the size of grapefruit. "Is it broken?" she thought. "How did I get out here!?" she quickly panicked. Laney was in the park not even 2 miles from the place where she lays her head; the place where she can tune out the world and feel safe. Her home, better said, her room. After a nice day in class and a calming middle shift at work, she just wanted to unwind. "All I wanted was to read a fucking book, maybe smoke a jay..." she blubbered to herself while covered in dirt, leaves in her hair, and 2 copper streams of dried blood down her legs.
Im showing example how I am able to create a scene and Pitch dialog.