"Hi there,
My name is An. I'm from Vietnam. I want to improve my English writing skills.
Every day, I will write a short piece of writing about 250 words. I need you to help me edit my writing and find the best way to express my ideas.
Below is a sample that I need your help with. Let me know you're interested in my project by giving me some feedback, explained in detail how and why I should re-write the piece of writing.
Do you think voting and elections can make a difference?
I think voting and elections can make a difference if the voters are wise enough to choose a person eligible to become a great leader. Sometimes, I wonder why Vietnam is still a developing country. In past, I used to think it is because we don’t have a good choice as our political leader. But now, I think it is us, not the leader that can cultivate or bring the change in our society. If we all become responsible citizens on our part, we can play our role in the development of our country.
Looking forward to your helpful comments, I hope we can work together.
Best regards,
An An
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I have read and rewrite the complete text in your project description for your help to decide is it helpful for you. In future, i will tell and explain every change in your writing that i will make and eventually it will start improving your writing. I hope we can work together in a team effectively and greatly. Let's get started to make your writing better :)
Best Regards,
Waqas