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Hi there, My name is An. I'm from Vietnam. I want to improve my English writing skill. Everyday, I will write a short piece of writing about 250 words. I need you help me edit my writing and find the best way to express my ideals. Below is a sample that I need your help. Let me know you're interesting with my project by give me some feedback, explained in detail how and why I should re-write the piece of writing. Do you think voting and elections make a difference? I think voting and elections make a difference if the voters are wise enough to choose a people eligeble to become a great leader. Sometimes, I wonder why VN is still a poor country. In the past, I thought because we didn't have a good leader. Our choice were wrong. But now, I think it's not depend too much we have a good leader or not. It's depend on us. It's depend on what we do to become a helpful citizen for our country. Hope your comments. I hope we can working together. Best regards, An An
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Hello, how are you? I can do the job you need with relevant speed and accuracy. I have relevant experience in all kinds of writing jobs such as article writing, content writing, and others. I can write an interesting and readable mater for your blog and website. Let me know how can I help you? Thanks!
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I am an experienced writer and editor. I've been in this industry for 7 years now. I have a vast experience in editing dissertations, academic papers, application essays, novels, websites, and scripts. You can also check on my reviews for proof of 100% completion rate and perfect works in the past. I graduated Cum Laude with the Bachelors Degree in Broadcast Communication from University of the Philippines, the top university in our country. I look forward to working with you.
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Hi there! I understand that you need someone on a daily basis to check your writings and thoughts so that they would be more coherent and expressive in terms of the ideals you represent. I have 10+ years of experience doing just that, so I am confident that we can make great progress in expressing your thoughts and desires. Get back to me soon so we can talk about specifics.
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"Hello, Having been an English teacher at a University, I understand how important it is for immaculate proofreading, especially for our students who are submitting Masters and PHD dissertations. Perfect grammar skills and rewording sentences, is a necessary and important skill that I have honed after years of experience in academia. Often when doing proofreading, second language speakers, make basic mistakes as they are not native speakers. I am a specialist in this field. As a meticulous English teacher, teaching different skills, including grammatical structures, I would be able to spot mistakes and rewrite where and when necessary. The use of specific vocabulary comes with experience and I have gained that over many years of doing this specific craft. Regards"
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I am well versed in the English language and a workhorse in terms of customer satisfaction, leadership, and discipline. I am also self-reliant, very keen on details, a great team player and can easily find ways to motivate myself and my co-workers. Over the years, I have accumulated thousands of happy, satisfied, and returning clients for the long list of freelance services I offer. I have earned my customer’s trust by delivering high-quality work and excellent support services at all times. I am an ambitious freelancer who works round the clock to deliver excellent results. Customer satisfaction is my number one priority and is the primary driver of my success. With me, you are assured of original ideas and work, strict adherence to the deadline requirements and keen observation of the project instructions. I proofread and edit my projects thoroughly before submitting them. My three core values are EFFICIENCY, QUALITY, and EXPERTISE.
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Hello Sir/Mam, Dinesh here. Creative writing is my passion. I have the experience and skills that are needed to create articles that will keep the readers’ attention and make them want to learn more about what you offer. Every article that I write is 100% unique being free from plagiarism. I have a 100% customer satisfaction guarantee. When you hire me for your writing needs, you can count on affordable excellence I do quality research work n believe in hard work. Regards
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I have been a freelance writer of articles plus proofreader and editor for 8 years. My bid is for 2 articles at $2.50 each. In regards to your piece of writing it is good but there are several spelling errors along with using incorrect pronouns. For example: ....choose a people eligeble to become a great leader should be ...choose a person eligible to become a great leader. In other sentences some words should be added to make more sense and give it more flair. Also used the wrong verb tense.
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Hi, I rewrote the article with corrections: I think voting and elections make a difference if the voters are wise enough to choose people who have the potential to become great leaders. Sometimes, I wonder why VN is still a poor country. In the past, I thought, it could be because of not having a good leader or because our choice was wrong. But now, I think it doesn't matter if we have a good leader or not. It all depends on us. It depends on what we do to become a helpful citizen of our country. Message me if you like my rework. Thanks MightyWriter
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"Hi there, My name is An. I'm from Vietnam. I want to improve my English writing skills. Every day, I will write a short piece of writing about 250 words. I need you to help me edit my writing and find the best way to express my ideas. Below is a sample that I need your help with. Let me know you're interested in my project by giving me some feedback, explained in detail how and why I should re-write the piece of writing. Do you think voting and elections can make a difference? I think voting and elections can make a difference if the voters are wise enough to choose a person eligible to become a great leader. Sometimes, I wonder why Vietnam is still a developing country. In past, I used to think it is because we don’t have a good choice as our political leader. But now, I think it is us, not the leader that can cultivate or bring the change in our society. If we all become responsible citizens on our part, we can play our role in the development of our country. Looking forward to your helpful comments, I hope we can work together. Best regards, An An " I have read and rewrite the complete text in your project description for your help to decide is it helpful for you. In future, i will tell and explain every change in your writing that i will make and eventually it will start improving your writing. I hope we can work together in a team effectively and greatly. Let's get started to make your writing better :) Best Regards, Waqas
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Hello there, An I think reaching out to learn more is a very great and noble idea. I would like to offer my services to you. I would like to discuss more of this project as well. Below are my comments to improve your writing :) I think voting in elections makes a difference if the voters are wise enough to choose someone eligible to be a leader (this whole phrase can be improved by removing the pronoun I, and use the third person instead (I.e Voting during election would make a huge difference if...)). Sometimes, I wonder why VN is still poor. In the past, I thought that it might be because we didn't have a good enough leader (same comment as above). Our choices were wrong. But now, I think It does not depend too much on having a quality leader, rather, it depends on the citizens and what they do to contribute to the society (See what I did there? I used "rather" to connect two ideas". This helps in conveying and strengthening your reasoning. This also avoids repetition of sentence length) General comments: -some typographical errors and grammar mistakes -wording can be a bit improved -repetitive sentence length Overall good writing and every concern can be improved.
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My English is fluent. I've learned it for 13 years. I have two years of experience in translating documents of various fields. Your ideas are clear although there are many significant grammar errors in the text. If you want my help, just write me.
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I can help you with your topic Explain to me what you want to do to work together I can terminate your topic within a few hours. You can talk to me about it and what you want to do. I can understand and work hard2
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I can help you brothe
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Hi! I can definitely help you with that. Please message me so we can discuss further about your project. I can help you proofread, edit and explain how you can rewrite your pieces. Thank you!
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I will accept your project...
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Hi, An. Even though I am a civil engineer by profession, writing has always been my passion. I can help you edit this, and give feedback and suggestions on your writing so you won't need to hire more editors and proofreaders in the future. For your sample, < Do you think voting and elections make a difference? >, it might be a good idea to answer it straight to the point and then support it by asking yourself 'why' and 'how'. Also, check your spellings, subject-verb agreements, contractions, and abbreviations. :)
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There are grammatical mistakes and some rewriting is needed.
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Hi an! As i was reading the content of your article, I noticed that you have a potential in the field. These are the areas that need improvement I can help you with: 1) Thesis statement - powerful and catchy start of your article. This serves as a window of an article. 2) Choice of words - this helps you deepen your vocabulary 3) Use of effective passive sentence - where the subject is not the doer of the action 4) Grammatical rules for errors - for your article to look professional, mastery of grammar is essential. 5) Sentence coherence adherence - sentences in a paragraph should be collaboratively constructed. 6) Better words for subjective statement - synonyms for the start of your opinion such as "I think" 7) Sentence structures - should consist of one topic, 2 or more supportive statements, and a concluding sentence. 8) Paragraph structures - sentences related to each other should be within a paragraph 8) Conclusion statement - this is what remains in the mind of the reader after reading your piece. I can definitely help you with those areas and provide you tips, knowledge, and my own techniques. I can also assist you developing your writing style and learning other writing methodologies. Don't hesitate to message me. I will help you in any way possible regardless of the pay. Regards, John
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Hello there, In regards to your sentence, I would adjust it as this:- Do you think voting and elections make a difference? I think voting and elections make a difference if the voters are wise in their choice of eligible candidates that would become a great leader. Sometimes, I wonder why Vietnam is still a poor country. In the past, I thought because we didn't have a good leader or perhaps we chose the wrong person. But now, I think it does not depend how good of a leader we had elected but us. It is up to us, as citizens of Vietnam to change the country for the better.
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You have made a lot of grammatical and spelling mistakes in your sample. I can help with you with expressing your ideals in a way that will resonate and connect with anybody that reads them. I am gonna rewrite the sample you provided so you can get some sense of how I write. Voting and Elections make a lot of difference and the difference is for the better but the voters should be wise enough to choose a person that has the qualities of a great leader. Sometimes, I wonder why Vietnam is still a poor country. In the past, I thought that because we didn't have a good leader, a leader who was dedicated to our country whose purpose in life was to help it not destroy it. Our choices were wrong. But now I think we as a people should hold ourselves accountable too. We are the ones who bring these people into power. We need to evaluate ourselves and dedicate our lives to help flourish our country so it can rise to the greatness it deserves. It is our duty and our responsibility as a citizen of this great country to help it grow and unite together as a people and end this stream of corruption and greed that is rotting it.
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Hello, I am a native English speaker with experience in editing, proofreading, and teaching. I can work with you daily to improve your skills. Feel free to contact me to discuss. I am open to working on just the writing or also doing video sessions to practice speaking. I teach English learners of all levels and can customize your lessons to your level and goals. Best, Melissa
$15 USD Om 3 dagar
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